Comments for T*R*O*A*M*M http://troamm.wordpress.com aka the collected writings of an unknown author Sun, 06 Sep 2009 06:22:53 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Quarantine by New Story – Quarantine « T*R*O*A*M*M http://troamm.wordpress.com/quarantine/#comment-29 New Story – Quarantine « T*R*O*A*M*M Sun, 06 Sep 2009 06:22:53 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/quarantine/#comment-29 [...] Story – Quarantine Howdy. I’ve posted a new short story called Quarantine. It’s about zombies. Published [...] [...] Story – Quarantine Howdy. I’ve posted a new short story called Quarantine. It’s about zombies. Published [...]

]]> Comment on The Guitar Man by Cap'n Rufus http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-guitar-man/#comment-23 Cap'n Rufus Fri, 11 Apr 2008 17:21:07 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/?page_id=20#comment-23 Very poignant. Very good. Very poignant. Very good.

]]> Comment on The Guitar Man by New Story… « T*R*O*A*M*M http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-guitar-man/#comment-22 New Story… « T*R*O*A*M*M Wed, 09 Apr 2008 21:53:05 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/?page_id=20#comment-22 [...] The Guitar Man [...] [...] The Guitar Man [...]

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by Chris http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-four/#comment-19 Chris Thu, 02 Aug 2007 18:11:01 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/chapter-four/#comment-19 Hmm. I can see what you're saying. I have updated both some of the dialogue and the compass scene. Fortunately, this is the Internet and this story is a living document. Yes, there is additional navigational equipment. But, Edmund doesn't know how to use it and his crew doesn't like him. Bad combination. More of that will be received next chapter. I'm not going to put a date on it, because everytime I do, I miss it. It will be soon, though. Hmm. I can see what you’re saying. I have updated both some of the dialogue and the compass scene. Fortunately, this is the Internet and this story is a living document.

Yes, there is additional navigational equipment. But, Edmund doesn’t know how to use it and his crew doesn’t like him. Bad combination.

More of that will be received next chapter. I’m not going to put a date on it, because everytime I do, I miss it. It will be soon, though.

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by H2Prose http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-four/#comment-18 H2Prose Thu, 02 Aug 2007 15:59:58 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/chapter-four/#comment-18 "Yes, the needle continues to point North, but only on the compass itself. No matter which direction I turn, the needle remains pointing at the “N.” " -- This feels awkward. There seems to be a different feeling of dialogue to this chapter as well, like he hes come forward a few generations in time. Like, "Don't get me wrong." doesn't seem to be a phrase that would have been common. And last, would they not have had a sextant in addition to a compass? It would seem foolish not to have a backup navigation method. Unless I missed something which is entirely possible. With all that said. I like it and am looking forward to more. When? Do we have to wait so long again? “Yes, the needle continues to point North, but only on the compass itself. No matter which direction I turn, the needle remains pointing at the “N.” ” — This feels awkward. There seems to be a different feeling of dialogue to this chapter as well, like he hes come forward a few generations in time. Like, “Don’t get me wrong.” doesn’t seem to be a phrase that would have been common. And last, would they not have had a sextant in addition to a compass? It would seem foolish not to have a backup navigation method. Unless I missed something which is entirely possible. With all that said. I like it and am looking forward to more. When? Do we have to wait so long again?

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by Chris http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-four/#comment-17 Chris Thu, 02 Aug 2007 12:50:49 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/chapter-four/#comment-17 Of course. Of course.

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by H2Prose http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-four/#comment-16 H2Prose Wed, 01 Aug 2007 23:47:58 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/chapter-four/#comment-16 Well it's about farking time. do you want any criticism? Well it’s about farking time. do you want any criticism?

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by It’s been a while… « T*R*O*A*M*M http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-four/#comment-15 It’s been a while… « T*R*O*A*M*M Tue, 31 Jul 2007 14:02:37 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/chapter-four/#comment-15 [...] As it is, I must continue! Here’s Chapter Four. [...] [...] As it is, I must continue! Here’s Chapter Four. [...]

]]> Comment on Chapter Three by New Chapter Posted « T*R*O*A*M*M http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-three/#comment-11 New Chapter Posted « T*R*O*A*M*M Thu, 17 May 2007 14:52:24 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-three/#comment-11 [...] New Chapter Posted May 17th, 2007 Enjoy. [...] [...] New Chapter Posted May 17th, 2007 Enjoy. [...]

]]> Comment on Chapter Two by Geek http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-two/#comment-10 Geek Thu, 10 May 2007 16:01:15 +0000 http://troamm.wordpress.com/the-logs-of-one-capt-edmund-m-hogglesforth-on-his-long-voyage-to-antarctica/chapter-two/#comment-10 I am truly enjoying this. You do a great job of "getting into his head." Very like actually reading what I assume such a man would pen in his journal. Keep it coming. I am truly enjoying this. You do a great job of “getting into his head.” Very like actually reading what I assume such a man would pen in his journal. Keep it coming.

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